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At the edge of the universe
Blistering in oblivion
He waits, watching the turn
Of Time and Space.

Shaking the stardust
From his sails
He boards his ship
And stands at the prow
Of his mighty vessel.

The fire of a thousand suns
Burns in his hearts
And the waking of a million days
Echoes in his lonely eyes.

The last great warrior
Defender of the Universe
The blood of his enemies thick
On his hands.

The one true hero
Rescuer of maidens
Knight amongst men
Savior of worlds.

Destroyer,
God,
Angel,
Monster.

He is all of them.
The Time Lord,
Reigning supreme
From his broken throne.
More Doctor Who poems. Are you surprised? No. XD

The title is from a description of our Sun, from National Geographic. I thought it fitting. :)
I really enjoy this one, guys.
Constructive feedback is always a yes. :iconlachoirplz:
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the-jackyll Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2010
I like the imagery in this one, I think this is my favourite of your poems I've read so far. Very vivid. :)

That title is indeed fitting.
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future-time-lady Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2010   Writer
Thank you so much! That means a lot. :)
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kingtuter Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2010  Student General Artist
Ok Favorited this!
constructive criticism.... ehm instead of waking I would have said dawn :P
thats about it :P
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future-time-lady Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2010   Writer
Thanks!
Yeah, I can see what you mean about that. I suppose I just felt that "dawn of days" ect was a bit cliche. Thank you for that though, I always like it when people actually take the time to give me a thoughtful response. :D
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kingtuter Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2010  Student General Artist
No bother :) me too :P
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future-time-lady Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2010   Writer
:D
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